Your criticism is very interesting, but instead of just presenting some abstract ideas of potential problems it would give much more impact to your argument to present some hard evidence that your way of thinking is better.

Can you show an example of an app that will generate more problems for developers with this approach than with other platforms?

BTW do not forget to add some possibilities to pay you for your work with such a publication, I would certainly be willing to pay for a good in-depth analysis.