Good job. I would expand on your responsibilities on each site a little more. For example, you say "Redesigned the site in HTML and CSS" Why did you do this? What were the benefits? Did it load faster? Was it easier to maintain, thereby saving money down the road?

Here is my portfolio page if you want to have a look - http://mattmccormick.ca/portfolio

Since I put that up, I have basically gotten at least an interview to every position I have applied for that matched my skills.

nice portfolio but the page header is partly off-the-page. the top of the writing (of your name) is cut off. this is on Safari 5 on Mac OS 10.6, fyi

Watch out for that bad ' in "Site’s I designed & built"

Edit: Nevermind, you fixed it now :)

My Mom pointed that out to me too, thank you!