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ozzy6009 on Aug 15, 2018 | parent | context | favorite | on: Bullshit-sensitivity predicts prosocial behavior

I think it would sound more metaphorical if you removed the indefinite articles, instead starting with "The river cuts through rock"

anewone on Aug 15, 2018 [–]

But that doesn't emphasise why. The point is to say "keep on truckin'".

If you have to spend a minute thinking about erosion first then it loses its punch.

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