This is completely unrelated, but I found this paper to be similarly brilliant in its simplicity, clarity, and rigorous explanation: https://ramcloud.stanford.edu/raft.pdf
I have a hard time already convincing myself that correct sequential imperative algorithms are indeed correct - which probably means that I'm a bad programmer, but I can't change who I am. So convincing myself that that Raft, a concurrent algorithm, is correct (meets its specification) from an informal description is completely out of question - where is the formal proof of correctness?
This is completely unrelated, but I found this paper to be similarly brilliant in its simplicity, clarity, and rigorous explanation: https://ramcloud.stanford.edu/raft.pdf