ha, thank you for your honest feedback. My intended audience is not PhDs or math majors, it is high school physics teachers, practicing engineers, programmers, precocious high school students, etc. Many of these people benefit from some definitions.
I include 3 sentences defining a scalar so that I could introduce the concept of grade.
I include a few sentences defining a vector because just read the comments here and you'll see there are many definitions of vector and I want to specifically call out the one I care about in this post. I am also using a nonstandard, color-based notation throughout the article so it is helpful to take a concept that people already know just to demonstrate my notation. This also lets me introduce the 3D interactive illustrations.
Did you read the rest of the article or were these two definitions so objectionable that you quit?
Hi. I wrote whole section on the history of GA and what happened and why it isn't already the norm, but I chose to remove it because the article is already far too long, and I don't think that my intended audience (engineers, compsci people, university undergrads) would care about the history. Apologies that wasn't what you would have preferred.
I think the article is great, and I think the interactive illustrations are sweet. Thanks for the taking the time to write it.
As an educator, though, when I see presentations of existing ideas that present them as if they were new, I die a little. You're standing on the shoulders of giants whether or not you think so, and whether or not you say so. It's best to figure out who the giants are, and how you're standing on them. When you are up front about the connections to past scholars, you are giving the credit to those scholars that they deserve, and you are strengthening the storyline, and you are setting a good example for the people that look up to you.
You can add a few sentences at the bottom saying, if you've gotten this far, congrats, you understand some basics of GA, and then link to other resources about the history and current applications of it.
author here. I was mistaken about the 5 degrees of freedom bit. Bivectors have three. I'll fix the text tonight. I'm sorry you wasted ten minutes on my nonsense.